Wednesday 24 October 2012

1) Where blue and yellow for our first Pride Assembly on Monday
2) Grade four science due Monday (food chains)
3) Finish revising and editing your personal decalogues

Today, in writing we developed a success criteria to use when editing and revising our decalogues. This criteria is a simple list of things to 'look for' when revising. Hopefully, we'll get better throughout the school year at using these criterions.

Success Criteria for Personal Decalogues 
  • Write with detail 
    • Exciting words (verbs, nouns, adjectives) 
    • Help the reader visualize, by describing how you did things. 
  • Capitals at the beginning and periods at the end of sentences. 
  • No spelling mistakes or grammatical errors
  • You should have TEN ideas that are different 
  • Start every sentence with a different word
  • I’ve tried my best to share as much about myself as possible

4) Keep your Healthy Eating Assignment charts up to date
5) Milk order forms home
6) Halloween letter home